This was a sensational song by Michael Jackson that released in 1988. I played it on my Walkman throughout till the batteries ran dry. Those were the years, eh! I was really obsessed with that cassette. It’s a self explanatory song that describes how this criminal sneaks in undetected to hack and kill Annie to death. They’re calling out to her to see if she’s okay. But she’s already lifeless and dead. So they move on in pursuit of the criminal instead.
Smooth Criminal – poem by Ruelha
We're on the lookout for a smooth criminal Who performs his acts in silence and low decibels He slips and enters your home undetected A knack that he has skillfully perfected But there's no such thing as the perfect crime You're going to get caught soon any time This man, he slipped in through the window But all that was seen is his intriguing shadow Yet, a careless mistake he did make That put his modus operandi at stake Annie, are you okay? Candy, are you okay? Are you okay, Annie? As he slipped into her apartment He segregated the faculties into compartments And so she was hit by ...a smooth criminal The wavelength he operated on was subliminal It was exactly a Sunday What a way to ruin a beautiful day You've been hit by, you've been struck by You're the bullseye; you're the bullseye Of a smooth criminal! Oh dear Jackson, Michael... This your song, is truly sensational Annie, are you okay? Annie, are you okay? Are you okay, Annie? But he left bloodstains on the carpet And with forensics, it's completed its circuit But Annie's no longer okay; she's no longer okay She met her doomsday, her doomsday that day! Annie, are you okay? Annie, are you okay? Are you okay, Annie? Annie, are you okay? Annie, are you okay? Are you okay, Annie?
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Smooth Criminal – lyrics to Michael Jackson’s original song
As he came into the window Was the sound of a crescendo He came into her apartment He left the bloodstains on the carpet She ran underneath the table He could see she was unable So she ran into the bedroom She was struck down, it was her doom Annie, are you okay? So, Annie, are you okay? Are you okay, Annie? Annie, are you okay? So, Annie, are you okay? Are you okay, Annie? Annie, are you okay? So, Annie, are you okay? Are you okay, Annie? Annie, are you okay? So, Annie, are you okay? Are you okay, Annie? Annie, are you okay? Will you tell us that you're okay? There's a sound at the window Then he struck you, a crescendo Annie He came into your apartment He left the bloodstains on the carpet And then you ran into the bedroom You were struck down It was your doom Annie, are you okay? So, Annie, are you okay? Are you okay, Annie? Annie, are you okay? So, Annie, are you okay? Are you okay, Annie? Annie, are you okay? So, Annie, are you okay? Are you okay, Annie? You've been hit by- You've been hit by- A smooth criminal So they came in to the outway It was Sunday, what a black day Mouth-to-mouth resuscitation Sounding heartbeats, intimidation Annie, are you okay? So, Annie, are you okay? Are you okay, Annie? Annie, are you okay? So, Annie, are you okay? Are you okay, Annie? Annie, are you okay? So, Annie, are you okay? Are you okay, Annie? Annie, are you okay? So, Annie, are you okay? Are you okay, Annie? Annie, are you okay? Will you tell us that you're okay? There's a sound at the window That he struck you a crescendo Annie He came into your apartment He left the bloodstains on the carpet Then you ran into the bedroom You were struck down It was your doom Annie, are you okay? So, Annie, are you okay? Are you okay, Annie? You've been hit by- You've been struck by- A smooth criminal Okay, I want everybody to clear the area right now Annie, are you okay? (I don't know) Will you tell us, that you're okay? (I don't know) There's a sound at the window (I don't know) Then he struck you, a crescendo Annie (I don't know) He came into your apartment (I don't know) Left bloodstains on the carpet (I don't know why, baby) And then you ran into the bedroom (help me) You were struck down It was your doom, Annie (dag gone it) Annie, are you okay? (Dag gone it-baby) Will you tell us that you're okay? (Dag gone it-baby) There's a sound at the window (dag gone it-baby) Then he struck you, a crescendo Annie He came into your apartment (dag gone it) Left bloodstains on the carpet (hoo, hoo, hoo) And then you ran into the bedroom You were struck down (dag gone it) It was your doom Annie
Oh Lord Rue Hehe It Practically
Slays Me Not to Hear You Sing
Your Lyrical Version of “Smooth
Criminal” on YouTube And While
i Will Reach Some Mighty Low
And High Notes Michael
Jackson is One
Original
i Just
Cannot Do
As True It
Should Be
Criminal How
You Beat Michael’s
Lyrics With Your Beats
of Creativity Swelling Up
For All To See Oceans
Of Your Potentials
Springing
New
And
Oh My Goodness i Always
Thought This Song Was About A
Dude Stealing All the Young Women’s
Hearts Away With His Original Moon Walk
Dance And Leaning Dance Steps Attached
With Wires too Yes Next Challenge in Original
Creativity
Develop
A Moon Walk
Dance Dear Rue
More Original Than Mike too…
Remember i Didn’t Even Start
Until 53 So Much Ocean Ahead
of You So Much Wave You are Still Coming to be Now…
Anyway So Sad All the Fame And Fortune The Prison
That Took Michael’s Childhood Away In Demands of
Artistic Perfection That Truly Ended up Destroying
The Most Important
Real
Gift of All
His Creative Soul
to Even Find Out
Who He Even Was
Always Entertaining
Never Even Really
Coming to Be
Good
FRiEnD’S
With God In His Mirror…
i Really Can’t Match The Feelings
Of This Music Video Resurrecting
Michael Jackson’s Artistic Soul
After The Fact As It Were
Searching Finally
Finding
The Lover
Within Complete
Whole Naked Satisfied Complete…
FRiEnDS With Gravity Balancing All
Peace With No Fear Loving Exhale For All
Where all that’s
Left of the
Crime of
What
Was
Done to
Him is Smooth my FRiEnD
No Longer Any Need to Wear A Mask…
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That’s not a bad suggestion! We could have collaborated a jam if you lived around ya Fred!
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Hehe Dear
Rue i’m
Not Faster
Than A Speeding
Bullet Yet i
Do Reach
Breath
Of
Your
Creativities
Through This
Fiber Optic Cable
At The Speed oF Light
All the
Way
To
India
With SMiles…
Thanks For Letting
me Join in on the Fun!🥳
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A classic!
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Indeed 🙂
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