This poem is purely literary. It is inspired by a song by Lucky Ali in the 90’s titled ‘O Sanam’. Please read it with an open mind and out of respect for the written word. To me, writing is my life. There is nothing I love more. I have a very creative imagination. I have always written from my heart …about topics that I am passionate about – Christianity, makeup, poetry, food, romance, women’s issues, soulful music etc. Given the circumstances, my gender, situation, geography etc, I feel the need to put up a disclaimer everytime I write a romantic piece. Everyone is entitled to an opinion. But, please don’t interpret this poem in a way it was not intended. That is just my humble request.
MUSINGS Throughout the day, I'm looking your way. I wake, eat and sleep. Do all the meet-and-greets. But in the midst, even in all this, I see you. Time is cruel. Like a training school. A truant heart. Cannot part. Discarding rules. To be a tool of fools. This heart ain't a toy. Even for a mature big boy. Memories of you. In my heart a wild zoo. Everything you did. Seemed so splendid. Now even the worst. Quenches my thirst. Temporary solace. I think of you as flawless. Irrespective of the deeds. Always on my prayer beads. Unable to forget. Hold no regrets. For this experience. Brought upon deliverance. The soul always knew. But the body craves too. It's always been you. I've made mistakes too. But, I never toyed. Never intended to destroy. Now missing you. The ripples of a touch. Like electricity, is such. Making love to a mind. Is beyond this world, divine. So far, You are. But I feel you near. Though you disappear. What are these episodes? I find you; then my heart explodes. Because you come and go. I can't take this anymore. Tormenting my yearning heart. That hasn't made peace with this part. ....my beloved sweetheart. Upon love, I swear. My soul to you, I bare. Only with you, I have this flair. Nowhere elsewhere. Even death cannot snatch. Your memories never detach. My sweet sugar patch. Intoxicated with you. Cravings, my body has a few. Withdrawal symptoms. Never seem to weaken. Fallen from your grace. In this rat race. Just remember me. And be happy -RUELHA www.ruelha.com © Copyright Protected. All Rights Reserved. Image source:rapidleaks.com
Lyrics of the original song O Sanam by Lucky Ali (1996)
Shyam savere, teri yaadein aati hain
aake dil ko mere yoon tadpaati hain
o sanam, mohabbat ki kasam..
Morning and evening, your memories come (to haunt me),
those memories come and torment my heart..
O my beloved, I swear upon love itself.
Milke bichhadna toh dastoor ho gaya
yaadon mein teri majboor ho gaya
o sanam, in yaadon ki kasam
It’s become a tradition …to get separated after meeting.
I’ve become so helpless in your memories,
O my beloved, I swear upon these memories..
Samjhe zamaana ke dil hai khilauna
jaana hai ab kya hai dil ka lagaana
nazron se ab na humko giraana
mar bhi gaye to bhool na jaana.
The world thinks that the heart is a toy,
but I have now understood what it is to give someone your heart.
now don’t ever let me fall from your good graces.
even if I die, don’t forget me.
Aankhon mein basee ho, par door ho kaheen
dil ke kareeb ho ye mujhko hai yakeen
o sanam, tere pyaar ki kasam..
You reside within my eyes, but you are far away somewhere else,
and still I believe that you are somewhere near my heart.
O my beloved, I swear upon your love..
Love is An Ocean
People Are Waves
Some Surf Love With Such
Ease Always Warm to Touch Give And See
Ripples of Warmth Grace Of Lakes Streams Flow
Yet Hurricanes
Come And Go
Rising Falling Raging Waves
Just Holding On To Balance Now
Above Surface Breathing Yet Indeed
Some Surf Love With Such Ease Just
Warm Everywhere They Go i’ve Tasted
The Ocean Just About All of it Yet A Lake
of Grace Now Warm Ripples Just
Feathers of Birds
Dipping
Wings
to Fly Again in Peace
Hello Rue Hope Your
Day is Beautiful my FRiEnD..:)
LikeLiked by 1 person
Beautiful Fred….thank you for those warm ripples of gracefully good thoughts…..have a blessed blessed blessed week.🙏🏼💐
LikeLiked by 1 person
SMiLes Dear Rue
Thanks And
You too
As Forrest
Gump’s
Mother
Related to
Him Too
Blessed
Does
As
Blessed Is
Yet i Do Believe
i Am ReMeMBeRinG
The
Reality
Show
Version
Of That
Too With WinKS😊💫
LikeLike
Your talent unites beautiful verses with good music. Stunning poetic musings Ruelha. Great work 🌸😍 ☀️💓
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you Vgeorg for your encouraging compliments and support always….🤗🙏🏼💐
LikeLiked by 1 person
Beautiful poem dear Ru. 💕💕 And the rhyming is just awesome! Just remember this… I am happy whenever I read your poem. 🤗❤️❤️❣️💕
LikeLiked by 2 people
Thank you Preeths…..I’m so glad my poems bring about a smile on your sweet face…😘😍😘😍😘😍😘😘😍😘😍😘😍😘😍😘😘😘😂😘😘😘😍😘😍😘 hugs and loveeeeee
LikeLiked by 1 person
Beautiful blog
LikeLiked by 2 people
Think you Rajani 🤩
LikeLike
You’re words are magic ✨
LikeLiked by 2 people
Thank you Aman….that’s such a sweet compliment 🤗🤗🤗🤩🤗😍🤗🤩🤩🤩
LikeLiked by 1 person
Always Welcome Ruelha 🤗
LikeLiked by 1 person
🥰😍🥰😍
LikeLiked by 1 person
Such beautiful soulful poetry you have strung which is music to the senses and reaches far and wide! Nice Job Rue… so beautiful.. Love and Hugs!! 🙏❤️🙏❤️
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you sweet Cindy 🥰🥰🥰
I’m glad it was plesant to your senses…..love and hugs right back at ya …🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗😍🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗
LikeLike
You are most welcone Rue!!! It sure was and whatever man lands you will be a lucky soul!!!
❤️❤️❤️❤️
LikeLiked by 1 person
Awww man….Cindy ….
I gotta frame this comment and keep it on display somewhere …..some people need to see this lol😂😜😛🥰😍😅😜
LikeLiked by 1 person
absolutely, I know the real deal when I see her!!!!! Do that and read it everyday!! ❤️❤️❤️❤️
LikeLiked by 1 person
Cindy my doll, you are really very good for my ego.
I have told you before too….
I’m gonna get rid of my mirror/mind and talk to you on zoom instead……😍🥰😍🥰😍🥰😍🥰😍🥰🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗😍🥰😍🥰😍🥰😍🥰😍
LikeLiked by 1 person
Beautiful Ruelha and a lovely song, remember we all love you and enjoy reading your poems 🙂
LikeLiked by 2 people
Thank you Eileen….I’m so glad you enjoyed this piece. And especially your reply…love you too my friend 😍🥰😍🥰😍🥰😍🥰😍😍🥰😍🥰😍🥰
Have a blessed day🙏🏼💐🤩
LikeLiked by 1 person
Blessings to you as well my friend ❤️❤️❤️😀😊
LikeLiked by 1 person
🥰😍🥰🙏🏼🙏🏼🙏🏼🥰😍🥰😍🥰🙏🏼🙏🏼🙏🏼🥰😍🥰😍🥰🙏🏼🙏🏼🙏🏼😎😍🥰😍
LikeLike
Excellent poem, Ruelha. Good song as well. I appreciate that you posted a translation of the lyrics. Although, I’m not one that has to understand the words to appreciate a song or a movie. Years ago we rented the movie Asoka. We couldn’t get the subtitles to work, but we watched it anyway. It’s a wonderful movie. Afterword I bought the DVD and we watched it with subtitles.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Reblogged this on By the Mighty Mumford and commented:
HER STYLE REMINDS ME OF HOLLY HUNTER’S LOVE POETRY! GREAT FEELINGS IN INTERESTING PACKAGES! ❤
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you JonDaddy….
Remembering you fondly…
Praying for you today…
I know God has made a way….
Love and hugs from your cyber daughter Rue
And special kisses to Diana too😍🙏🏼😍🙏🏼😍
LikeLiked by 1 person
BY WHICH I AM ESPECIALLY BLESSED AND GRATEFUL FOR, MY LOVED AND BLESSED ONE! “D ❤
LikeLiked by 1 person
🥰🤩🥰🤩🥰🤩🥰🤩🥰🤩
It’s only a reciprocation of all your love JonDaddy…
🥰🤩🥰🤩🥰🤩🥰🤩🥰🤩🥰
LikeLiked by 1 person
which finds love radiating out from you ❤
LikeLiked by 1 person
Awwwww…..JD🥰
LikeLiked by 1 person
AND DAT’S DA TRUFFFFFFE! *TRUTH,,,WITH “F” INSTEAD OF “TH” (FOOLISH ENGLISH)
LikeLiked by 1 person
😍🤩😍🤩😍🤩😍🤩😍🤩😍🤩😍🤩
LikeLiked by 1 person
😀
LikeLiked by 1 person
RUE, MY DEAR ONE—–HOLLY HUNTER’S BLOG IS “HOUSE OF HEART” IN THE WORDPRESS READER…..SHE’S MY FAVORITE RED HEADED POETESS! 😀 AS YOU ARE MY FAVORITE AND ONLY DAUGHTER!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thanks for sharing my poem JD…
I have been following her….she does write extremely well….talented girl….
Awww….JD….you’re a cutie….😍🥰😍🥰😍🥰
LikeLiked by 1 person
THANK YOU—-DEAR ONE—CAN’T SAY I EVER THOUGH OF MYSELF THAT WAY…BEFORE…BUT IF YOU SAY SO IT MUST BE! ❤ 😀
LikeLiked by 1 person
It is 🥰🙏🏼😎🥰🙏🏼😎🥰🙏🏼😎
LikeLiked by 1 person
😀
LikeLiked by 1 person
HOLLY JUST TOLD ME THAT SHE’S VERY IMPRESSED WITH YOUR BLOG, TOO! ❤
LikeLiked by 1 person
Wow….that’s awesome to hear JonDad🥰😎🥰
LikeLiked by 1 person
LOOK HER UP!
LikeLiked by 1 person
🤩
LikeLiked by 1 person
she’s loving and kind…like i am…but…prettier! 😀
LikeLiked by 1 person
JonDaddy….you’re a sweetheart…
LikeLiked by 1 person
AND A PUSHOVER! ❤
LikeLiked by 1 person
🙃😅😎
LikeLiked by 1 person
NOT HEARING ANY DISAGREEMENT HERE!
LikeLiked by 1 person
JonDaddy you ain’t no pushover!….
Like I always say….you’re a big cuddley bear….that description suitsyiu best….😍🤗😍🧸
LikeLiked by 1 person
who has been know to growl like a big old grizzly bear! :d
LikeLiked by 1 person
🐻🧸😂😍
LikeLiked by 1 person
I love this song sooooo much Ruelha. And I love your poem too
LikeLiked by 2 people
Thank you Rubysunnn 🥰😎🙏🏼🥰
LikeLike
Woah, aching romance and love.
LikeLiked by 2 people
Thank you for stopping by and taking the time out to read this piece Jude. 🤩💐🙏🏼
LikeLike
A deep pleasure Ruelha🧡🌼
LikeLiked by 1 person
🙏🏼🤩🙏🏼
LikeLiked by 1 person
You really know how to tell a story with your way of words. Thanks for sharing I can’t wait to read more.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you Kally….I’m so glad you liked this story….have a blessed day my dear🥰🤩
LikeLiked by 1 person
Beautiful!! A part of the legendary musician’s life and journey is intricately detailed by lyricist Aslam Noor in his memoir, which is now on Amazon Kindle
LikeLike