This poem is purely literary. Please read it with an open mind and out of respect for the written word. To me, writing is my life. There is nothing I love more. I have a very creative imagination. I have always written from my heart …about topics that I am passionate about – Christianity, makeup, poetry, food etc. Given the circumstances, my gender, situation, geography etc, I feel the need to put up a disclaimer everytime I write a romantic piece. Everyone is entitled to an opinion. But, please don’t interpret this poem in a way it was not intended. That is just my humble request. Anyway, this piece is inspired by the song ‘Memories ‘ by Maroon 5.
MEMORIES It still seems as if just yesterday, But it's been so long and far away. There are so many memories, in my heart's treasuries... When I'd gaze into your eyes, I'd feel like a small child. Absolutely safe and secure, when you were near. It still seems as if just yesterday, But it's been so long and far away. There are so many memories. In my heart's treasuries... The way you flipped your hair. I'd just want to blush and stare. With you beside, I would always smile. Day or night, just all the while. It still seems as if just yesterday, But it's been so long and far away. There are so many memories. In my heart's treasuries... I remember our drives and walks. All our songs and dreams and talks. Oh babe, you did have style. I still remember your number, the one I'd always dial. It still seems as if just yesterday, But it's been so long and far away. There are so many memories. In my heart's treasuries... I still remember your scent. Like opening a huge bouquet, a present. If I close my eyes, I almost taste your body, just about every nook and every cranny. It still seems as if just yesterday, But it's been so long and far away. There are so many memories. In my heart's treasuries... Unlike other men, freedom to wear, anything I wanted, you did'nt care. If something upset you, you were subtle. But smartly convincing and so gentle. It still seems as if just yesterday. But it's been so long and far away. There are so many memories. In my heart's treasuries... You were all I ever wanted. But things just became so knotted. You were my biggest weakness. Because you filled my life with sweetness. It still seems as if just yesterday. But it's been so long and far away. There are so many memories. In my heart's treasuries... On you, I was always sweet. Settled into my every heartbeat. Of you, I always wanted more. But my heart, you stomped and tore. It still seems as if just yesterday. But it's been so long and far away. There are so many memories. In my heart's treasuries... But now all I have left of you, is memories, but a thousand few. And whenever anyone mentions your name, it rekindles tamed embers into a mighty flame. -RUELHA www.ruelha.com © Copyright Protected. All Rights Reserved.
Lyrics:
Here’s to the ones that we got
Cheers to the wish you were here, but you’re not
‘Cause the drinks bring back all the memories
Of everything we’ve been through
Toast to the ones here today
Toast to the ones that we lost on the way
‘Cause the drinks bring back all the memories
And the memories bring back, memories bring back youThere’s a time that I remember, when I did not know no pain
When I believed in forever, and everything would stay the same
Now my heart feel like December when somebody say your name
‘Cause I can’t reach out to call you, but I know I will one day, yeahEverybody hurts sometimes
Everybody hurts someday, ayy ayy
But everything gon’ be alright
Go and raise a glass and say, ayyHere’s to the ones that we got
Cheers to the wish you were here, but you’re not
‘Cause the drinks bring back all the memories
Of everything we’ve been through
Toast to the ones here today
Toast to the ones that we lost on the way
‘Cause the drinks bring back all the memories
And the memories bring back, memories bring back youDoo doo, doo doo doo doo
Doo doo doo doo, doo doo doo doo
Doo doo doo doo, doo doo doo
Memories bring back, memories bring back youThere’s a time that I remember when I never felt so lost
When I felt all of the hatred was too powerful to stop (ooh, yeah)
Now my heart feel like an ember and it’s lighting up the dark
I’ll carry these torches for ya that you know I’ll never drop, yeahEverybody hurts sometimes
Everybody hurts someday, ayy ayy
But everything gon’ be alright
Go and raise a glass and say, ayyHere’s to the ones that we got (oh)
Cheers to the wish you were here, but you’re not
‘Cause the drinks bring back all the memories
Of everything we’ve been through (no, no)
Toast to the ones here today (ayy)
Toast to the ones that we lost on the way
‘Cause the drinks bring back all the memories (ayy)
And the memories bring back, memories bring back youDoo doo, doo doo doo doo
Doo doo doo doo, doo doo doo doo
Doo doo doo doo, doo doo doo
Memories bring back, memories bring back you
Doo doo, doo doo doo doo
Doo doo doo doo, doo doo doo doo
Doo doo doo doo, doo doo doo (ooh, yeah)
Memories bring back, memories bring back youYeah, yeah, yeah
Yeah, yeah, yeah, yeah, yeah, doh, doh
Memories bring back, memories bring back you
Are you going to put your poem to music? It would make a fine song. The stanzas that start with “It still seems as if just yesterday” could be the chorus and the stanzas in between could be in a rap-style. I think it would work well to have a woman sing the chorus and a male voice do the rap. It would have a nice back and forth juxtaposition.
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That’s an awesome idea Timothy. Maybe I’ll ask a friend who is good with music to help me out cos I don’t play any instrument and have no understanding of it. Rap style….I can imagine a more softer version now after you gaveme this brilliant idea….
Oh wait….now I get it….a mix of(male) rap and (woman) pop also sounds groovy…I loveeeeee the idea Timothy…..absolutely….
Thank you so much….Now let’s see if i can do something about it 😅🙈🤭💭🤓🧏♀️🎼🎤🎸🎹
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Would you mind if I took a stab at putting your poem to music?
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Sure Timothy….go ahead….I wish you all the best….please don’t forget to share with me….I’d love to see how it all works out 😊😊🤩😃🤩😃🤩😃🤩😃🙂😃😊😊
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Ok. I’ll email you an mp3 of whatever I come up with.
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Timothy…..the song is lovelyyyyyyy….quite catchy…. I love it. I just opened my email and I’m so pleasantly surprised….the beats and tone is just so groovy…..what are the instruments you used to compile this piece?
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I’m happy you like it. It needs work. I did it as written, but I think it my work well to not have the chorus between each of the rapped stanzas. What do you think?
I’m playing electric bass guitar and electric guitar for rhythm and lead guitar. I assembled the percussion from samples.
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Sounds great Timothy….can’t wait to hear the next version…..😃😃😃🤩🤩🤩🤩😃😃😃😃
Wow….that’s so awesome….I really wish I could play an instrument too….but…🙃😄
Really loved it btw🎸🎶🎧
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hey great idea..Ruelha should really try it
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Yes indeed….I think it’s an awesome idea….😃😊😃😊😃😊🎤🎹🎸🎼
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Reblogged this on By the Mighty Mumford and commented:
YOWZA, RUELHA-!
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Thank you for sharing my poem Jonathan 🤩🙏🏼💐🎀🙏🏼🤩💐
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GOOD GODLY STUFF CAN’T BE SHARED ENOUGH! ❤
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🙏🏼🙏🏼🙏🏼🙏🏼🤩😍🤩🙏🏼🙏🏼🙏🏼🙏🏼
Thank you so much Jonathan
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MY EXCEEDING PLEASURE, SIS!
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This is so great. Fresh and alluring. I tried writing poems too and I am learning so much from great poetry bloggers like you. Thank you, Esdi.
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(I’M BLUSHING UNDER THIS GREYISH UNSHAVEN FACE OF MINE) ANY QUESTIONS OR STYLE CONCERNS—I’LL DO THE BEST I CAN! 😀
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SMiles Memories of a First Love; Babe Perfume, Baby Powder, and
A Sweater With The Smell Of Her Cuban Mother’s Little
Cigar Smoke True Mostly Smelling Memories
It Seems for that First Love Then
Of Course How Will We Forget
Our Last Lasting Love too..
For my Goodness There Were
Some Lean Decades Tween Financial
Independence Like Still Making 5 American
Dollars and 12 Cents An Hour At 30 Years-Old
Perhaps Before You Were Born Hehe Now at 21…
Working At The Same Job for 6 Years Then it’s true
Where i Lived even with 3 College Degrees without much
Ability to Put Anything Into Oral Presentation of What i Learned
In 3 College Degrees Yes.. I was lucky to find Any Job at all only
Selected for a Job at a Military Bowling Center as it Became Computerized
in 1984 and they snagged me for the one Class i Had in an Introduction to
Computers one and another For Data Analysis in Social Science as they were
Better With Hands-on Machine
Repairs than Bits And Bytes
of Actual Computer Operation
Oh the Hungry Days as at
First Katrina wasn’t working
Either Not Unlike Lois Lane She Worked
At The News Paper and Eventually i wrote Monthly
Articles About the Winners at the Bowling Center for
The Sports Page There Oh for so many Years too..
True You Come to Believe Nothing About Life
Will Ever Change that way Yet True too
No Human Potential to Expand
in the Struggles of Life
Yes all Watered
Down
to Routine
so Yeah it may Sound
Not So Romantic Yet the Memory
That Always Touched me as we couldn’t
Afford More than a Dollar Burger Through
A Drive-Through At Wendy’s Is She Always Gave
Me Almost Half of Hers as She Always Put my Appetite
Ahead of Hers and as You Might imagine She Still Does
As Yes i can and will eat Lots of Calories to take me through
An Exercise Day like today that lasted a Good Solid 8 Hours through
Gym Through Store Dance through Neighborhood Dance With
Her And My Sister And now these words Dancing Across the
Page
At
Rue’s
Home of
Writing Memories
too for it’s True the Human
Mind (HeART)Will Not tell the difference in
How Fiction or Reality Feels and Senses
With Our Imaginations Fully Employed in Art
of Creativity This Way Indeed a little Bit of Heaven
May
Come
With
A Brush
Of Paint
To Color Words
Home as Well..:)
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Oh my, this is gorgeous Rue. 👏This become my favourite poem of yours. 😍😍 Every line is so salient and beautiful. Love and hugs 💕🤗
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Thank you Preeeeeeeeethsssssssss♥️🤩♥️🤩♥️🤩♥️🤩♥️🤩♥️🤩♥️
You’re a doll🎀💐🤩🎀💐🎀💐🎀💐💐🎀💐🎀💐🎀💐🎀💐…..
🎄☃️🌟🎁🎅
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Reblogged this in Offshore Writings. 😊
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Thank you Preeths …..for sharing my poem…♥️🤩🎀
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Beautiful reminiscence
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Just my crazy imagination Jude😅🤭😉🙃🙊😅😂
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❤️😃👌🏾
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you have such a beautiful heart Rue. ❤
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Thank you Den 🤩🎀🤩🤩🤩🎀🙏🏼♥️🙏🏼🎀🤩🤩🤩🎀🎀
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HEY—RUELHA—ARE YOU ALRGHT-? YOU KEFT IN AN AWFUL HURRY! HAVE I SCREWED THINGS UP AGAIN? PLEASE SAY SOMETHIING—LIKE I LOE YOU! I DO LOVE YOU –DO YOU BELIV ME: JONATHAN CASWELL—“J.D. 😀
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JD. You’re an amazing cyber dad and a lovely person who’s been so warm and kind. But it can get overwhelming to see 10 emails in a day. I like being social but I also like to retire in silence at the end of the day. I am not someone who can constantly concentrate on my relationships. It’s just not me. My family and friends understand that and give me that space usually. It does not mean that i don’t appreciate what you do or that I don’t care. But I’m more of a silent, good thoughts and vibes kinda person. I cannot communicate regularly with anybody. It just overwhelms me and makes me uncomfortable. I hope you understand. I love you as a daughter should….but this is me…I’m the one who pops in once in a way….
🙏🏼🎀💗🙏🏼🙏🏼🎀
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MY HEART PURRS WITH UNDERSTANDING! ❤ I HAD NO IDEA–AND YOUR JON-DAD IS KIND OF THE NERVOUS TYPE.AND TAKE THINGS MORE PERSONALLY THAN HE REALLY SHOULD.. SIGH. POSSESSIVE, TOO. I WILL-WILL-RESPECT YOUR SPACE. I CAN WORRY LESS.
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SECOND BREATH (!) DID YOU GET AN ANSWER MY EMAIL…CONCERNING YOUR INCLUSION IN MY BIO?
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❤ U ALWAYS ❤
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did u know I really truly deeply love you? i’ll curb my enthusiasm…somehow Dads get excited about their daughters!!!! MY LOVE, MY DAUGHTER RUELHA—is exciting to her Daddy! >3 xoxo
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